Thoughts on Project Renaissance Sequals?

I’m trying to get some feedback on the Project Renaissance: White Wings. DM me what you liked about White Wings, what you hated about it, and what you’d like to see in future sequels. I’m always interested to hear from the reader’s perspective. When I'm reading any book series, I always hope for specific encounters or plot points. When I was a child, I’d write letters to authors with requests. I don’t think any ever replied (looking at you D.J. MacHale). However, rest assured I will do my best to respond to worthwhile ideas.